我曾寫過一個帖子，介紹如何將一個復(fù)雜的英文句子翻譯成中文。昨天我收到網(wǎng)友“CQ美眉”的郵件，她請我再寫一個帖子，介紹如何將一個復(fù)雜的中文句子翻譯成英文，也就是再寫一個相反的帖子。這位網(wǎng)友還特意給我提供了一個例句，請看下面：
▲每一個人，作為社會的一個成員，有權(quán)享受其人格和尊嚴(yán)的自由發(fā)展所必需的社會、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化權(quán)利，這些權(quán)利是通過國家努力和國際合作來實現(xiàn)的，并且與所在國家的組織、資源、現(xiàn)狀相一致。
對于這種比較復(fù)雜的中文句子，在正式翻譯成英文句子之前，應(yīng)當(dāng)按照它的含義，將它劃分成不同的部分，以便我們確定英文句子的結(jié)構(gòu)。我首先將這個中文句子劃分成6個部分，請?zhí)貏e注意，第4部分嵌套在第3部分中間。
▲①每一個人，②作為社會的一個成員，③有權(quán)享受 [④其人格和尊嚴(yán)的自由發(fā)展所必需的] 社會、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化權(quán)利，⑤這些權(quán)利是通過國家努力和國際合作來實現(xiàn)的，⑥并且與所在國家的組織、資源、現(xiàn)狀相一致。
這樣劃分之后，我初步?jīng)Q定，將第4、5、6部分翻譯成三個定語從句，用來修飾第3部分的最后一個單詞rights，請看：
①Everyone
②as a member of society
③is entitled to the social, economic and cultural rights
④which are necessary to the unrestrained development of his/her personality and dignity
⑤which are realized through national effort and international cooperation
⑥which are concordant with the organization, resources and situation of each country.
不過，在英語中，通常是一個定語從句修飾一個名詞，很少有三個定語從句修飾一個名詞，因此我臨時決定，將第4部分改寫成一個短語，將第5、6部分合并成一個定語句子，請看：
①Everyone
②as a member of society
③is entitled to the social, economic and cultural rights
④necessary to the unrestrained development of his/her personality and dignity
⑤which are realized through national effort and international cooperation and concordant with the organization, resources and situation of each country.
最后，將這5個部分組合起來，就是這個中文句子的英文譯文。
Everyone, as a member of society, is entitled to the social, economic and cultural rights necessary to the unrestrained development of his/her personality and dignity, which are realized through national effort and international cooperation and concordant with the organization, resources and situation of each country.
另外，LT論壇的ptbptb網(wǎng)友另提供的一個版本如下：
Everyone, as a member of society, has the right to social security and is entitled to realization, through national effort and international co-operation and in accordance with the organization and resources of each State, of the economic, social and cultural rights indispensable for his dignity and the free development of his personality.
（來源：萬千英語族 作者：張宏 英語點津姍姍編輯
